Love the mealody
Nice build ups and transitions.
Wow this is really lovely.
1:10 i got goosebumps.
Have to say im a little inspired :}
Maybe the piano its being muffled a little to much
maybe around 1:23 you should change it up. make it faster. Because at 1:23 is kinda like te break area or something (forgot the name) of the song so it should like completly stop (the fading in drums didn't sound like such a good transtion back) and then like a explosion or something and have a fast paced beat and sick mealody. anyways its up to you. Great work man :}\\
(p.s i can really tell your getting serious. Spending time trying to better yourself< i respect that greatly)