Cebster's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Distance and Unity]

like the tune

and nice speaker. i like the power cords and singing was awsome. good lyrics too always have trouble with them.

[Kick Back Laser(complete)]

wow funny to find you here

Damn way way way way way wyayayywyaqywayaywaywy better!!! sounds so professional too transions beatifully and the reverb/ speaker jumping makes it sounds so sick. but i still dont think it sounds completelly done. sorry to burst your bubble, but even after a full day of working its still almost imppossible to finish a song. first off that bass you added doesnt pull the song through it sounds like more background ambiance, not heavy or hard hitting. also try to spice up the drums a bit. depending on what program you use theres a way to side chain {side chaining is when the background ambiance is triggered by your bass to drop instantly and spike back up giving the song a trance like feel i say this might be a good idea because the drum pattern is very trance}. i can teach you how if you use Fl. also your musical scores are pretty nice but get som what repetative. i really dont like telling you tyhis for two reasons, first off these are just my opinions second is cause i know that this is the last thing you want to hear after a full day of making music. but its all for good cause because if zellers hadnt did the same for me i would have gotten nowhere. the again he only did that for me cause he thought i had talent, thats why im doing it with you. so keep up the good work. Gold Star! p.s. phew that must have been the longest comment i ever typed.

grandman1023 responds:

wow.......if zeller supported you then im really going to trust ya and yeah i actually mixed one of his songs before so check it out some time but yeah your right i can do better but the thing is i dont know if i should just keep the beat and get rid of the synths and try to make more trance sounding synths...any idea just hit me up on mail

[inanimate]

i concur 5/5 10/10

it has such a chill ass beat and rythem. the intro was amazing. errie creepy feeling. great work. transitions and flows through nice.

[Kick Back Laser(demo)]

hmmm

i dont think its junk out all. and i know how feeling dissapointed after long strainous hours of work feels. the kick hits really hard. but i have to say after reviewing songs all morning this is one of the most proffessional iv heard. nice fading in transition. at first i thought near the end you were losing it but when you brought it all back together i was like damn this is pretty sick. so long as its a demo i think you need to fix it up a little. theres something i feel is missing in this song. hmm i think its the bass. you need a bass synth or something of the sort to pull the song through.. anyways keep it up. i like your work. Gold Star.

grandman1023 responds:

woo hoo this review just inspired me to finish it......maybe by saturday i should have it completed....thank you!!!
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[SpaceBlink]

:}!!!

reminds me of.. well me when i first started out FL. i think its pretty cool soundig and nice work. keep working!!

Eyelids-pie responds:

Such an honour! I thank you, kind sir!

[Stop Motion Symphony]

i dont even need to watch the video

when i first saw that video i loved the music. and what you did to it was pretty amazing. feels way more epic.

[Warning Do Not Eat (DjD)]

pretty sick

i like the sequances you used. and the way the song progresses is very nice. allong with the mane musical score. i thought the drums were ok, but nothing to special. it seems like you spent allot of time on the musical score and it shows. Gold Star. keeep doing what your doing.

Mad-Muppet responds:

Thanks for the review! Yah, the sequences were the stuff that i worked on the most, the drums didn't get alot of work this time...

[Dark Side of the Mind]

nice

this is pretty sick. the drums are sick and it seems like you spent allot of time on the musical score. i like the instruments you used and how the song flowed.

[<LE>Eternity Lightwaves Remix]

wow

man you did an amazing job on this. everything sounds very professional and the transitions were awsome. the drums were really nice i like the quality. songs really chill and sounds reallly nice.

[Play in the Sand]

wow its really good.

first of all the title attracted me to it. its just a great name. i have been going through your work and i see your style. i like it. your songs are built apoun soild ambiants that pull the song through. i like the change up around 3:07. ihonestly i think you have talent but i think you need a solid lead. for example if you had a nice synth to lead to go with the ambiance it would be some really high ranking stuff. anyways just keep at it man. im going to check up on you from time to tim. GOLD STAR> keep up the good work.

philjo responds:

ooo good ideas there my man. Constructive review, and still managed to make me feel pleased as punch. I agree, this track, while catchy, lacks some kind of defining lead melody. Like i told pandora, its a big wall of noise that could possibly knock you over if played loud enough! not what i was after, honestly (evil smile)
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