dont worry about a low score seriously
it happens to me and some other other best authors i know so just let it go. anyways about your song. pretty sick i must say. i love the name the overall track is starting to sound more proffesinal. i think thats the glass electric guitar right? i kinda try not to use to much of them because they are on obivous fake guitar. although i must say your use of it is very powerful. your score is pretty intese. the flow is smooth and transitions are pretty nice. in fact looking back to when you first started playing with other samples other then the panio i would have to say your improvment is incredible. something you might want to start playing with is autamative clips (dont know if thats spelt correctly). anyways in fruity loops theres like a bizzilion knobs. some adjust volume other the amout of you know what ever. even the filters or fx you used have knobs. anyways by right click on that knob and going down to creat autimotive clip you can control that knob while the song plays. youll see something pop up in your playlist. so for example if you wan t the volume of your main instrument to slowly raise while the song plays you find its volume knob do the right click, then in the playlist make the autimative volume conrol go up or down. i cant explain it to well. its just something you will have to play with. anyways i hope this helps good look.